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« on: December 06, 2005, 09:43:27 PM »

This poem isn't perfect but it was something I was feeling one night last year.


I take a look in the mirror, I don’t like much what I see
who is this person reflecting back? certinley dosen’t look like me

Some people stop and stare, for what? is something wrong with my hair?
I admit though I don’t always feel this way as I have my days and other times I don’t even care.

Short and very chubby I will never look as good as some
it’s a wonder though because even I still feel shunned.

I wish I could take a step back and see what other’s see in me
Tall, thin and beautiful just wasn’t on the list of features that were meant to be for me.

They say that beauty is only skin deep but for me it’s hard to believe
for if I was some kind of beauty I wouldn’t be sitting here today and wondering what it is that other’s see within me.
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« Reply #1 on: December 06, 2005, 10:25:11 PM »

Love this poem, Alicia!! In a way it makes me feel sad Cry I am sure that many of us have felt that way at one point or another. Smiley
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When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on.
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« Reply #2 on: December 07, 2005, 01:54:53 AM »

sorry if it was cheesy, other poems I wrote I'm too shy to share so I thought I'd post a couple of these original one's for starters.
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« Reply #3 on: December 07, 2005, 10:05:38 AM »

That's a great poem -- I feel that way sometimes too  Embarrassed  Sometimes I feel like life's not fair -- but to me, you're beautiful inside and out.  And I don't think your poem is cheesey at all!
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But, oh, what a beautiful thing when you sing
Hear all them bells ringing out in the street
Hammer strikes the metal and it makes me believe
'Cause if I don't believe in love
Then I don't believe in you
And I do
~Ryan Adams
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Re: Untitled
« Reply #4 on: December 15, 2005, 12:11:31 AM »

Awww thanks Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: December 11, 2006, 06:50:41 AM »

Alicia, I know those feelings so much. It's a really good poem.
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